Ragged Death
Whisper to the winds for each touch doth sends mystic visions that replenish while disembodied sins diminish that which dwells and blends beneath the blanket of night lost to the darkness and stripped...
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Well.. looks like to be the black side of your lastest "Inner beauty", some kind of sad compensation for the good of the other side. Well done again._________________________________________________...
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thanks for reading mirielle. I wouldn't necessarily call it the darker side - just some musings and an attempt to rhyme )~ perhaps an extention from the lost one's midlife crisis currently going on....
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I do like the rhyme scheme in this, and the way it flows effortlessly.
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psycho & scorp - ty both so very much for reading this! I'm glad the flow is nice considering how much I suck at trying to rhyme LOL indigoTrue love knows no boundaries.The heart's found its way...
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it feels lonely and sad....something lost....just the feeling i get from reading....
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At times the shadowy depths compel the rhyme to flow into sync with flow. You've written this with care and it shows. **clapping Lost in the solitude swims alone at times. Lit with Kick!
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My friend, long have I known how you normally feel about "rhyming," but I assure you used it well, and in this case, it did nothing but compliment your voice! Excellent dark! and I know that bright a...
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